Art, Writing, Opinion.
Post the other half of your filthy story and quit messing around on Youtube, slacker!
Lol. No and you can't make me! ;pBesides, I thought it scared you? Could you play the videos or did it come with copyright crap again?I really don't like that story...or know how to fix it without adding connective tissue. :(Ideas? Scrap it and write something else?
If it isn't working, leave it and if you feel the urge to come back to it then so be it. If not, then it wasn't meant to be.The videos played okay, but I usually prefer to read the transcripts of break-up letters, to save time.
But then you'd miss the point of that break-up letter reading. ;)